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For sun
And shadow
And majestic sweeping lines

For dawn
And dusk
For the death of mistrust

For day
And night
And all things in between

Moments that linger
And inter-finger
With dusk and dawn

For love
For us
Will the stars shine tonight

For you
And me
And all that we are

For time
For memories
All wrapped up in ourselves

For here
And there
Your night and my day.

Reach high
And spread your arms
Out wide; child of mine
Reach high

So the whole universe will see.
You. Me. Life lived, life loved.
Feet on the ground, head in the sky above.

Bird and bear, hare and fish.
Give my love her fondest wish.
With me now my love.
Through this negativity, our trial stands.

Hand in hand.
Stand, upon;
Golden sands.
©2008-2009 =Seppo-Ilmarien
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:iconbootchild:
Hey, been a while, hasn't it? The first lines got my attention, and I must say, this was quite beautiful. Love how you used dark and light aspects with this, that's what got me hooked on it, I must admit. It's very romantic.

I apologize for not talking to any of you for the past many months. I've been quite the busy Boot. As busy as I've been, however, I've not made much progress, but I'm getting there. Here's to hoping. Meanwhile, I'll try to be more alive. :B
:iconhonotori:
Been a while, sorry for not saying anything lately.

Like with Boot, the first lines got me. I love the yin yang aspects to the poem the two and two. I like poems of opposites that are whole, because that is life, we are not one thing or another, we are both. We are all.

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